Production Logo attempts

Our first attempt we thought was very poor...


We did not like this, as we can see the actress in the background and it did not come as a shock to the audience, we also didn't like the movement of the hand moving down the window, although this can be effective in some horror movies to signify the character giving up wanting someone to help, we didn't think it made an impact and was very poor camera skills.

However, we tried again, and this time we much preferred the outcome. Although, there are improvements that need to be made such as we want to dim the lighting and make it much more dark and eery, we also need to edit the production logo on to the hand. But this attempt was much better as we paused with just the trees blowing and the ambient sound of the wind, then the hand sharply hit the window.
Furthermore, my group was thinking of changing the setting so it looked like the actor who slammed their hand against the window was in an all white women, very clean, instead of using the outdoors. The use of changing the setting to a white room will foreshadow the opening sequence, as it would be more linked to the narrative. So, we might re-film the production logo again with a different setting and successfully edited.